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Postby quik-wit on September 30th, 2008, 12:33 pm

Submission Form: mini-story

Fanfiction Username: quik-wit
Title: Hello Dolly
Rating: G
Chapters: 1 (right now but I might make a when they were five series)
Words:119
Summary: a short about when Neville was young and curious about something.
Extract: (sorry this is going to be the whole thing, it's only 119 words)
Why hello dolly! A pretty lovely, lace dress and shiny black Mary Jane’s were her ensemble and he was sure she’d never looked better. Her smooth, red hair in two curly pigtails, he just wanted to stroke it. Five year old Neville Longbottom was sure he was in love. But Gran wouldn’t let him do what he wanted, ever, and so he knew he’d never get closer to her than he was now. She was so innocent looking and sweet. He sighed. He just wanted her to play with him! But, as he said, Gran wouldn’t let him. His eyes were so full of longing it was almost unbearable.

“Nev, darling, why are starring at Granny’s doll collection again?”
Britt -- One man that has a mind and knows it can always beat ten men who haven't and don't. (George Bernard Shaw)
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